My bedroom is a place where I can hangout with friends. The first thing I notice about my room is how clean it is, I rarely ever have clothes on the floor. Usually teenagers rooms are messy and their parents force them to clean it but they never do, on the other hand mine is neat and tidy so my parents never have to tell me to clean my room.
When I first take a step into my room I recognize my huge bed, covered in pillows and neatly made. I also see the brightness of my pink walls with a few posters laid out along them. I usually hear the sound of music playing in my room, this is the time when I can jam out! As I glance over at my bed I see a large pile of pillows to sit down and relax, enjoying the comfort of my bed, drowning in pillows and the feeling of softness on my hands. Beside my bed there is my desk, which usually reminds me that I have homework if I take a glance at it. Next to that is my dresser which has tons of perfume bottles and delicious smelling fragrances on it. My room always has a yummy vanilla air freshener scent to it and the smell of fresh laundry goodness. Now that the weather is beautiful and it's nice enough to have my window open, I sense the feel of wind blowing through my hair giving me a chill. I notice it whistling through my ears as the birds are chirping loudly. Along with that, when I gaze over at my window I notice my little neighbors running around in their backyard as my ears ring listening to them scream. I get a strong fresh smelling breeze of wind blowing through my window, I can almost taste it. My bedroom is a place to relax and hang around.
That was very descriptive, I like how you said that the sound of music always comes from your room and you can jam out that's how I feel in my room too! I like how you described not just the sounds you hear from inside your house but also the sounds you hear from outside.
ReplyDeleteVery good! I really like the end part when you described your window, because you gave a lot of sences to think about (if that makes sence) I really liked it!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you not only described your room, but you described a lot of things that you see, hear, and smell, good job!
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